Thursday, June 25, 2009

Winning Piece in the University of the Philippines Creative Writing constest

I got to share this to all of you, it's really good..

Its been 4 months since i saw him and talagang
namimiss ko na siya… pero what can i do? it
seems that i have loved the wrong person…. but
still the pain keeps on hurting me and kung
walang
magbibigay ng gamot para dito sa
nararamdaman ko…. baka mamatay na ako….

to give you a background about my life,
everthing seems to be fine except dun sa time
na dumating na sa buhay ko yung hinayupak na
lalake na yon…. hehehehe…. kung curious kayo
about dun sa guy… bestfriend ko po yon kaso
lang iba na ang nangyari as time passes by…..

classmate ko sya nung highschool. pards pa nga
ang tawagan namen…. o db ang sweet? di na ako
iba sa kanya and ganon na ren sya sa aken….
kung di nga lang ako naging babae baka naiuwi
na ako nun sa bahay nila and baka lahat ng
gawaing pang brusko eh ipagawa na nun sa ken
eh….. pero cyempre mukha pa ren naman akong
babae noh!!

highskul cyempre may pr om…. wala cyang date,
wla ren ako…. i know that he wanted to invite
me to be his date pero ang ogag nga kasi nun
kaya the last minute tsaka lang sya nag-ask. he
went to our house… nakamotor po sya and
medyo pawisan pero infairness…. mabango pa
ren….

he ask my permission to see my dress for the
prom…. cyempre para maloka sya sa aken at may
konting surprise… i refuse…. o sige, medyo
na frustrate sya pero hindi yon naging hadlang
para invite nya ko…. sa ganda ko na to…..
cyempre ang dami munang pa-echeng…. hanggang
sa tanungin nya ako kung may date na ba me….
e kung di ba naman siya abnormal eh…. papayag
ba akong makipagdate sa iba eh sya lang ang
gusto ko…. lam mo yon… sarap sampalin…. so
in short, papilit pa ba ako? syempre…..

the night of my life came, i was so pretty sabi
ng nang-uuto kong nanay… pero naniwala lang
ako nang sya na ang nagsabi…. blush ako
ever…. kahit alam kong maganda ako since
birth (hehehehe) iba pa ren yung sa kanya
galing diba?

we enjoyed that night and lalo ko lang
napatunayan sa sarili ko na mahal ko na pala ang
hinayupak na bestfrend ko……

syempre ano pa ba ang sunod na event sa prom
kundi ang graduation na db? the night before

the graduation, we talked on the phone na para
bang it would be the last time na maririnig
namen ang boses ng isat-isa….. ive waited for
the moment na mabanggit nya na may feelings din
sya and hindi naman ako nagkamali…. tinanong
nya ako kung may possibilty daw na maging
kame…. i know na maiinis kayo sa ken dahil
alam nyo ba ang sagot ko? ah, eh…. hindi
pwede kase bestfrends tayo eh…. yung mga anak
na lang naten yung ipag- partner naten…. sa
isip-isip ko…. ang tanga! pano ko nasabi ang
ganong words? pero wala na
akong magagawa….. alam namang bawiin ko pa eh
di nahuli naman ako db? pe ro ang tanga ko
talga….

cyempre college na…. im so proud to say na
napunta naman ako sa magandang school and take
note… pare ho kame ng skul….. ano to?
kailangan bang ituloy ang naudlot na
pagmamahalan namen?…. hehehe….

nagkaboyfriend ako for a year and a half….
minahal ko sya pero there are these conflicts
and problems na di na kayang ayusin…. in
short…. nagbreak kame…..

i guess god meant that to happen kasi yon din
yung time na nagkita kame ng bestfrend ko…..
sa sobrang miss namen ang isa’t-isa…. sabay
na kameng umuwi, kumain, pumasok….. im happy
pero parang lalo ko lang pinahirapan ang sarili
ko dahil my feelings for that guy grows each

and everytime that we are together… buti na
lang magaling akong magtago at magpigil….
hehehe…. bilib kayo noh?…..

one morning, im so busy preparing my project
that would be pass on that same day…. alam
kong dumati ng na sya at nasa likuran ko na ang
mokong pero dah il sobrang pressure sa
project…. gusto ko man syang dambahan…
cyempre mamayang gabi na lang di ba? hehehe….
di ko sya masyadong napansin…..

may inabot syang sulat sa aken and he asked if
i could join him sa lunch…. i said yes….
then, alis na cya…. alam naman kc nyang im
busy…..

when i was about to enter the room, somebody
bumped me and my precious project fell… gusto
ko mang magalet… what can i do db? instead i
ask my prof to give me another chance to do my
project…. naalala ko si mokong…. the lunch
date…. kinuha ko ang cell ko to text him that
i cant come to our meeting…. e kaso…. pag
tinamaan k nga naman ng malas…. check
operator service daw…. i tried to look for
friends or other kakilala pero malas that day
talaga….

and so i took my lunch all by my self….
naalala ko yung letter…. hinanap ko sa bag…
WALA !!!! bumalik me sa corridor praying na
andon pa yung sulat….
wala ren…. god! why?
minsan lang magbigay ng sulat yon…. nawala
pa…. dont know how to tell him about the
letter….

and so days and weeks passed, pag nagkikita
kame… di nya ako pinapansin… ako, i tried
to talk to him pero alam kong may kasalanan ako
pero ganon ba kalaki ang nagawa kong di
pagpunta at ganon na lang ang iwas nya?…
sige… hinayaan ko na lang….

months na ang binilang… i heard that he was
dating a girl from the same school that we are
in… masakit…. na sa iba ko pa narinig na
sila na…. mas masakit na wala na akong halaga
sa kanya…..

basta… ilang araw din yon na ganon ang
nararamdaman ko…. weeks…. months….
gagraduate na po ako…. i wonder what’s
instore for me in my last day in school…. and
so i thought na puntahan yung favorite hang
out namen…. when i was about to get near the
place…. i saw him… with the girl….
umiiyak ang bruha but i cant hear what they are
talking about…. so ive decided to get out of
that place before my tears burst out…. and
then a common frend ang sumalubong sa aken….
saying na buntis ang girl…. syempre…. durog
na durog ang puso ko…. kung kaya nyo lang ma-
imagine yung naramdaman ko…..

the night of that same day…. naloka ang lola
nyo…. nagparamdam ang mokong pagkaraan ng
pagkatagal-tagal na panahon… i thought it was
something good for me… for us…. pero i was
wrong…. so wrong….. he gave me a wedding
invitation and isa ako sa bridesmaids….. the
girl… she was waiting in the car…. o db?
dati
motor lang ngaun… car na….

and so the wedding came…. maganda po ako
nun…. sabi ng nanay ko pero wala ng nagsecond
the motion eh…. so naniwala na lang ako sa
nanay ko…. then, there was this professor who
came to see me…. he handed over a letter with
my name carefully printed on the enveloped….
he said that he looked for the owner of that
letter kaso lang po malaki po ang skul namin
kaya mahirap magkahanapan db? and so nung
nakita nya ang name ko sa invitation, he decided
to bring the letter thinking that it could save
souls… daw….

and so i was about to open the letter when the
priest
ask kung sino daw ang tututol… dedma
ako…. alam namang manggulo pa ko noh….

binasa ko na ang letter….. nakakatouch po
talaga…. he opened up his feelings for me….
hoping na meron din daw akong feelings for
him…. he ask that i f i will show up to our
hang - out the next day after he gave his
letter, then it means that i also have feelings

for him and that he would love me for the rest
of our
lives…. but if i wont…. then he will never
open that topic again…. he pleaded to me na
sana pumunta ako… …

if only i have that letter…. if only i knew
about it…. kung di lang ako clumsy and
carelss to keep
that letter… things would be
diffrent…. if only…..

and so i heard the priest announced the couple
as husband and wife…. ang sakit……

picture taking….. gusto mang sumabog ng
nararamdaman ko…. as you know…. magaling
akong magpigil…. pero masakit po talaga….
sobra……

after the picture taking…… niyakap ako ng
bestfrend ko…. ang higpit…. and teary eyed
nyang cnabi na….

i still love you…….

Epic fails! what a shame! LOL!!


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Wanted!!!

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